VN - Ren'Py - Profiler [v0.2] [DiveBar]

Profiler is a good trip to memory lane with the good ol' Sherlock Holmes mysteries. The game takes huge inspiration from Sherlock Holmes stories. Albeit, it is AVN set in that timeline. It's a story of its own. The developer is looking to aim something different. His approach to his renders and choices are different than your other AVNs. Some may take it the wrong way as it could be annoying to some, still I could say he has the guts to try something different which does look remarkable if done properly.

The music is beautiful. You can see the efforts the dev put into the music. Every music fits the respective scenes. Sex scenes are implemented well and good. The game is humorous so its does that part well at times.

Where I think the dev could improve is at camera angles. Some renders are too focused on the surroundings meanwhile the focus on the render is the character, so camera angles could improve. The story is done well, and im excited for more.

All in all, 10/10 would recomment

Here I have passed this game, and what can I say.... The game is wonderful, you can see that the author worked hard when writing the plot, lore, and character characters, dialogs are written as well at the level. Separately I want to emphasize the music, it was something unforgettable, I even at first could not believe that it was done with the help of AI-generator. As for the renders....
The renders, they're.... Wonderful, better than most other visual novel based on hs2. And updates are coming out quite often, with good spacing, and you don't have to wait for years, which I think is a huge plus. I'm just worried about one thing, is Abyss blind, or does she just have white pupils?

Tried this game one thing bothers me is MC attitude I don't like his attitude, sometimes he can be you know annoying, like always lots of lis looks similar, some of them is really too dramatic (MC's childhood friend) I mean sometimes these type of stuff can ruined your mood too, just like me, graphics is really good, animations are ok, not perfect but ok, visual and sound effects are good, there's few things can ruined your mood, one thing that's bothers me I can't understand few sentence like she's on other dimension, she's equal 3.5 Rudolf I mean what tf? What the hell is MC trying to say?

Overall it's can be a good experience for those who's just here for juicy content(not much but decent enough), but I'm much of story type guy so it's not my cup of tea.

Not really used to writing these long feedback but here goes, first off.. i really like the whole 'MC being driven by his tragedy and trying to seek the truth' kind of plot, I would expect the story would explore many way in which the MC confronts his fears and begins to trust others in pursuit to reach his goal at which would be great for the character development. It is important that the players are able to feel connected with the character or feel motivated to follow his journey. Really excited to see what's there to come for 0.3.

As for the nit-picky stuff, well they may too early to tell much since the game is pretty much still in an early development, but if i have one thing to say about the gameplay then its probably the distorted and erratic animation for the text/images, while the effects can be a bit unsettling, it’s clear that the intention is to immerse us in the character's experience, while this problem may have been addressed before. I trust that the 0.1 remade would be fixing all the apparant issues that it was having. (really love the soundtrack btw)

As for the MC.. well yeah it may seem that he's the antisocial type of person as given for most of his respond to everyone he has talked to (looking forward to his character development), and im sure that it has been given as an option but im really glad that we got to choose something casual for the MC to wear (he's literally a walking shawarma having to wear that everytime).

As for Abbys/Celestia (heh, get it?) she's a great artist and.. its kinda hard for me to get around her judging by her mere appearance as she seems to be quite plain compared to the other girls, while i'm also guessing that she's going to be the central enigma of the story. As for Skye.. well she's definitely the flirty/playful type of girl, although she can be quite arrogant and definitely doesn't take 'no' as an answer, it would be great to see more depth and layers to her character beside what we've got for now.

As for Wen, i really wished we got to see more growth of her since to me, she has always been seen as the generic 'childhood friend' character to the MC, at which i really hope there's more to her in the future <3. (!Tsundere alert!) Well here comes Val, the tough cookie. i really like her feisty and superiority attitude, it really adds up to her being a rival to the MC. Overall, i just love the dynamic between them. As for the other characters.. well i haven't exactly got any opinion about them (yet.) but i definitely looking forward to more of Skye and Lily.

And Ruri as well xD

Tried this game but again I deleted find it boring because I can't even continue and skipping the game makes no sense, if I'm gonna skip then what's the point of downloading the game?
Well after 2 attempts I again played the game, but now I finished the game finally!!!

Ok here's my thoughts........

1st the renders looks nice and made by honey select 2 it's quite eye catching for me.
2nd. The animations are ok sometimes it's shows mediocre and something it's ok.
3rd. Music was alright can't say much but decent.
4th. And the last:- you can't understand much and MC isn't much likable yeah he have some flaws but still I like male protagonist games too but only MC is a kind guy not our typical aggressive type or dumb type, just to be clear none of those two match with MC, story and MC isn't good then man it's already enough to ruined my whole mood I'm sorry but I'm out!

If I can't understand the story much then it's a no from me.

I just saw the romance tag so I thought to give a shot MC also looks good but then f***!!!
His attitude ruined my mood well then good luck to developer I'm sure there will be guys who will like your game.

Sorry it's my fault for having high expectations from this game, I thought I'm gonna like this game but how to say.......the writing was terrible honestly, typical dramatic, cringey dialogues, even though I like the MC still it's not enough, just having a good MC isn't enough, not only that typical childhood friend become your lover or lusting your body, I like this type of story but only it's well written, I just finished this game "not so" long ago but I don't even feel like giving the review, but on a second thought, let's write my honest review, I don't really like buttering others, oh did I said anything about renders? Renders was good! But still same type of cringey dialogues can me "ugh!" So yeah it's not my cup of tea, well there's a lot guys who like this type of game who can just ignore all those criticism I just wrote and play the game, but for me it's meh, but still good luck you have a long way to go.

This review is for version 0.2 so bear that in mind.

PROS:

A very interesting start. I'm a fan of Detective stories, especially Sherlock Holmes and it seems this game is going for a modern Sherlock with some of the old school elements (clothes and dialogue). This was a bit jaring for me at first as I was wondering why the MC is dressed like he wants to beg me for more porridge. lol

The renders are pretty good and the Lis are very sexy . I'm still getting a feel for the personality of the Lis so I haven't formed a definite opinion on them yet. However so far they seem complicated and I can't fit them neatly into a cliche Li type. Which I like. The first sex scene was very hot and visually appealing with sound and music used well.

The story so far has certainly captured my interest. The 0.2 update escalated the action, the tension, the mystery and pushed the story forward in a really strong manner. This feels like it could become one of my new favourites.

CONS:
My concerns so far are:

It's hard to determine the MC's personality as his behaviour varies and seems contradictory at points. Is he angry and traumatized by his past, is he detached from people because he doesn't know how to socialize and incredibly arrogant or is he something worse ? However it seems as if some the answers to his behaviour lie in the mystery that is being built , so I think it's worth being patient.


The first sex scene is a forced sex scene. I understand the reason behind the forced sex is that it is a flashback. It is a part of the MC's past and serves a purpose. I hope that any sex scenes going forward will be a choice for the player. As a player I want to control who I say yes or no to with respect to Lis.

The visual effects are really disconcerting. I don't have any seizures or eye problems, but even for me some of the red effect flashes and the blurry shaky effect of the text is almost headache inducing. The story is interesting enough and the visuals are good enough that you don't need to use fancy tricks to catch the eye.

CONCLUSION:
Really good game so far. it's definitely worth checking out and I look forward to seeing more.

Review 0.2
I don't know what to start so
Positive:
Know how to make the effect on the choice.
Nice Lis (Well only the Abyss girl, needs to improve every Li)
The story talks about Sherlock Homes but hope can work well with it
Cons:
- The developer seems unsure about the direction of the story.
- There's too much dialogue that players won't care about and will likely forget in the next version.
- Lots of cliché dialogue that seems meaningless.
- Sound effects are used, but they are misplaced (I saw the code, so please don't act like you know what's going on, like the previous reviewer. The sound effects are in the wrong place. I wanted to give this 2 stars, but the previous reviewer makes me want to give it 1).
Abuse SO MUCH DOF. FK THAT SH*T
At version 0.1, the developer needs to work on many aspects, including characters, Render, sound effects, UI, and story. I won't critique the render because I know the developer didn't spend much time working with this engine.
I will revisit this game later to see if the developer addresses these issues.
It's a good game overall, but it requires a lot of effort.

Review as a of 0.1


Pretty good start. Good enough that it compelled me to write a review for the first time, so that should tell you something. No sexual content as of right now, but clearly the developer is choosing story over quick fap, so I have no complaints.

Renders are above average, some of them have custom animations. The models are in fact very good. I'm more of a face guy than an ass/boob one so I can appreciate a dev that takes the time to make the girls pretty.

The story and characters are all pretty decent so far. We haven't seen enough for me to fully judge yet, but what little we have shows that the dev has thought things out. A darker tone that the one we're used to here, with some good memes sprinkled to light things up a bit.

Music is on point.

If I had to say something negative:
- Its a bit too short. (Around 15 mins of read time as of this review).
- UI is a bit clunky. Pretty, but renpy is optimized as shit, so having this many text effects makes the experience a bit awkward for people who read ahead of the text, as there is always that one 0.1s delay between lines, making things uncomfortable. Oh and before you say anything I have a 4090 and a 7950x, so it's not me. Not the dev's fault, its just Renpy being a bitch, but annoyed me enough to mention it.


Pretty solid overall anyhow, hopeful to see where it goes.