Hello.
The samples made me come. And the result is disappointing.
The worldbuilding is limited.
The characters are very few and different.
The plot could have been interested.
The artistic side is average.
The protagonist, in order to help his parents repay their debt from dubious lenders, is tricked into becoming a living sex doll.
The flow of events is too quick and repetitive.
The characters, outside the MC, are just random guys fucking him. There's no character development, even the one of the protagonist is limited.
The art could have been good. Too much exagerations : from the man boobs and ass cheeks to the expressions (too much ahegao
), without talking about the voicing and sounds...
The sex scenes are too similar : the MC is tied or hold and fucked senseless.
The english is average. There are even some japanese sentences left. The name of the speaker isn't always accurate, making some scenes very strange.
There are many endings and I'm not sure I'm interested enough to get them all.
It would have been better if there had been a progression in what he would have been willing to do. The mind control drug could have been used better. There could have been some blackmail to push him further. I was even expecting a double penetration at some point but it was just a succession of big dicks. At least, there was dry orgasms, which is rare, but that was his only way of release.
I usually like when I see they take pleasure but here, the tongue out and the tears were off putting.
Good continuation.